small stones – March 10, 2016


like caramel and chocolate
sweet, decadent, smooth
lingering upon the tongue
delighting the taste buds
sliding effortlessly
pleasuring the throat

like strong black coffee
bitter, pungent, sharp
a stab against the tongue
a shock to the taste buds
swallowed hard and fast
invading the throat

I am tasting my words
before I say them

15 thoughts on “small stones – March 10, 2016

  1. Annette says:

    Reblogged this on Annette's place and commented:
    This is an awesome and delicious poem by my guest author Lori Carlson. I want to share this one because it awakened my senses of smell and taste. My sister asked me “what morning tastes like” I gave a silly response I can’t remember what. But, boom my friend makes me actually taste the picture! That is talent I don’t care what anyone says! LOL! Yes, I am a Carlson/Ravyne fan! Taste this poem and go and tell Lori how it made you feel. I dare ya! 🙂

  2. Annette says:

    This one is so scrumptious my friend! And dare I say it….sexy!!! LOL!!! Love the picture too!

    • Lori Carlson says:

      Thank you, my lovely friend 🙂 it was a fun exercise 🙂

      • Annette says:

        Going to be real busy today so if you msg me I may not get right back. I have to get my reveal ready and A ready….I have a dang Dr appt April 1st!! So, I need to put it on a scheduled drop. I am relaxed and ready for insight and direction to hit me. Reading and reading…lol….xoxoxox

      • Lori Carlson says:

        No worries hun.. I am not feeling too well anyway, probably headed to bed here as soon as i make one final posting. Enjoy the experience 🙂 chat with you tomorrow, I hope xoxox

      • Annette says:

        xoxxo sleep with the fairies and angels my friend…sending my Mojo your way to help you fight this bug off….love ya

      • Lori Carlson says:

        Thank you, sweetie …I slept fairly well while I was sleeping.. up again and still feeling like blah 😦 love ya too hun!

      • Annette says:

        I hope today is better for you!

  3. calensariel says:

    Oooo! Love this. I did one once about tasting poetry. Great work.

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